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    dots Submission Name: Memoriesdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 328
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    We all make or own memories�

    I have my own,
    Just as you have yours,

    At times we replace them with new ones,
    Other times we long to forget certain things that our bodies nor our minds will not allow.

    As I look back at old memories I and others have made for myself.

    I have to say

    I never saw myself here!
    Where I am right now in my life!

    It's a satisfying thing though,

    that I am here
    It's a wonderful thing I didn't see
    myself here

    And yet I am!

    Can't you see?

    I am rejoicing to you!?!


    I have made it to a point that I never thought existed�
    I have accomplished so much
    I feel so very great full!!

    I have only one person to thank,

    For I would not be here if it were
    not for him..


    And I love him, at night I cry right next time...
    Because then is when it hits me!!!

    I am truly happy with this man and I have fallen head over heals for him.

    I want to go threw it all with him and I can't wait to make the best out of what I have.
    I am looking forward to this future I have

    He has given me a reason to smile everyday!
    He does everything right at the each moment!
    Just as he knows the right thing to say at what would seem like a bad time to anyone else

    As I cry next to him at night I look up at the sky�
    Thanking the Lord above...

    For allowing such happiness happen in this life of mine.
    For allowing us to meet our soul mates




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      A happy one! never see many of them nowadays, neither doI write them but... Anyways, good write, its going on my favs and its not my fault I can't stalk to save Tony Blair! (But then I'd purposely not stalk you, lol) Shadow
    | Posted on 2007-06-04 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      Your poem was very well written.At the beginning I thought you were going to talk about what you did in life that got you to that point.I was really suprised when you started talking about a man.But Im glad theres a twist sometimes you need that in poetry.
    Sincerly,
    the girl that cried wolf to many times
    | Posted on 2007-05-30 00:00:00 | by BlueTorcher | [ Reply to This ]


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