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    dots Submission Name: Stilldots
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    Author: sweetme16
    ASL Info:    18/f/who cares
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 108/251/162
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 191
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 785



    Description:
       about still being able to remember everything that happend that night


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    dotsStilldots
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    I can still hear you voice
    Strong and sure till the very end

    I can still hear your laugh
    Loud and contagious

    I can still see you face
    Always strong and beautiful

    I can still feel your arms around me
    Holding me tight
    Protecting me from the world

    I can still see you
    when I close my eyes
    Just the way the you always were

    I can hear you telling me that everything will be okay
    That we’ll both get out of this alive

    I can still feel the kiss
    That was your final goodbye to be

    I can still feel you heart beating
    Strong till the last second
    Telling me for eternity
    How much you really loved me




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