Love Like Lace -------------------------------------------
Slowly walk with me and take my hand
don't let it go
Listen to the rain splatter on the ground
never will you know
The enchanted hopes I have for us
a dream that will only grow
A love that can never be seperated
everyone can see
The Pathway we wil proceed and
all you've chosen to be
The beaty rages while he leans in
and kisses on thee
Bent at the knee he smiles back at her
and pulls out with grace
A box of shinning trust and golden love
with a tear drop from her face
She reaches out and places it on her skin
like a bow of shinning lace
The lace so pure with love so tough
that both openly knew
A gentle hug following a warm kiss
a love that is so true
Walk with me slowly and take my hand of lace
unto the open sky of blue
"The beaty rages while he leans in
and kisses on thee" Very nice, I agree with mdsouza, about your spelling. But then again what counts is the feeling it gives, if you understand it that it, lol. I bet no one will understand what I mean. :]
Keep it up!
This is lovely, Jamie! It's a beautiful love poem, with intrigue and mystery woven in with the romantic appeal. You have a developing talent that is brilliant!
Submission Name: Love Like Lace
