This poem is interesting for sure! Though, it deffinately has weakness written within it. I believe that if one is not strong enough to simply get up and walk away from the little accident, then they should simply accept death. It is the way of the warrior to never ask why. To simply take it as it is and change what you can, but always continue on the frontal march. That's just my personal views. As for your poem, it was well written, however i would suggest editing it a little here and there so that it flows a slight bit better and i would change the forced rhyme of "vanished" and "finished" in the second stanza... that's about all that i have.