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    dots Submission Name: Acbadadeadots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 9
    Class/Type: Haiku/Nature
    Total Views: 1165
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    Description:
       haiku - bless you - I've been reading "Yellowtail - Crow Medicine Man and Sun Dance Chief" - their word for God, Great Spirit of Creation and All - "Acbadadea" -

    Do No Harm & connect in respect to nature ~*~

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share



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    dotsAcbadadeadots
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    Acbadadea ~
    Great Essence of Creation
    Illuminating BeINg




    Submitted on 2007-05-30 21:24:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Abbracadabbra...I can pull a rabbit out of my hat.
    Haikus are too easy. You must be a boring writer.
    | Posted on 2007-06-04 00:00:00 | by Ur.Poems.Suck | [ Reply to This ]
       Hi Tiff,

    This idea was made for your gift called haiku. I said the word
    and it sounds so magical. Acbadadea!

    I think I can find a drumming pattern in the syllables and make
    it a rhythmic chant.

    Being the creation that we are, so simple and yet it's where
    the greatest surprises emerge.

    Love,

    Nan
    | Posted on 2007-05-31 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      Its was nice but way too easy. A Haiku must contain a referrance to the seasons

    | Posted on 2007-05-31 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]


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