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    dots Submission Name: Bringer of Paindots
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    Author: skinnard
    ASL Info:    22 male New York
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 38/76/49
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsBringer of Paindots
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    Im the bringer of pain
    The cayse of your sorrow
    The reason for rain
    Your loss for tomorrow
    Im the cause of disorder
    The end of your fate
    Full of chaos and horror
    Heart full of hate
    Im just a burden.....nothing else
    My cries for help, cries for a cure
    Outside my door, its all you'll hear
    Hell unleashed breathing fear
    Satans spawn, bloddy tears
    Loss of blood, speeding up
    Dying quick, my wrists are cut
    Slipping fast, my life is fucked
    But thats just life
    This is my fate
    I dont belong
    Hell is my gate
    Im a burden, a loss
    Just a problem
    A waste of breath
    Constantly crawling
    Im just a bringer of pain
    A cause of sorrow
    But dont worry about me
    Ill be gone tomorrow




    Submitted on 2007-05-31 10:34:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i know what it feels like to wish you were gone tomorrow. what is it that keeps us alive even after we want to die? for some people, it is hope. for others, it is fear of religion, not knowing where you will go. i invite you to read my piece: love pain and suicide. it has a lot of detial. just to let you know that you are not alone. just to show you that there are people like you and to see if maybe we can help each other feel better cuz being alone, is truly, the most horrible feeling ever.






    .....tina
    | Posted on 2007-06-30 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      THAT IS VERY SAD I HOPE YOUR STILL HERE TO ATLEAST READ MY COMMENT LIFE IS HARD PLEASE BELIEVE ME I KNOW BUT IT NEVER REALLY IS AS BAD AS WE THINK
    | Posted on 2007-06-01 00:00:00 | by mrs panther loc | [ Reply to This ]


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