Shatter my innocence, corrupting my modest mind
don't hesitate, tell me what your trying to find.
Embrace my vivid imagination
with your own obscene fabrication
distorting my perception of a rational impulse
to conceal what is truly false.
Let me decay in my cursed existence
while I’m being drained of all resistance.
Your perversion will not satisfy or stimulate,
but it will destroy and annihilate.
Your already ill fated and intoxicated.
So tell me what is realistic to you my friend
or are you misleading me to the very end?
| too me, this is very cunning -- not in a, |
i-have-fooled-you way . more like, you have
abandoned me & Left me in this drowning-pool.
justz too cut me down. [maybie i'm wrong]
but in any case, i thought the poem was very intense. head-strong, not going to forfeit.
i did like it (a lot) it made me feel - as if, even in darkness will still have power.
good write .....
fav line: To conceal what is truly false
...now that is fucking power !
|| Posted on 2011-07-30 00:00:00 | by Bloodstone | [ Reply to This ] || i liked this one too, innocence is something that isn't valued much anymore, glad you wrote about it!! have a good day and i'll read more...||| Posted on 2008-01-08 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ] || god i love this one! you have read it to me...but i liked reading it too!||| Posted on 2007-06-13 00:00:00 | by Frivilous _ | [ Reply to This ] |