Shatter my innocence
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i wrote this awhile back, and just now found it anyway yeah...
Shatter my innocence
Shatter my innocence, corrupting my modest mind don't hesitate, tell me what your trying to find. Embrace my vivid imagination with your own obscene fabrication distorting my perception of a rational impulse to conceal what is truly false. Let me decay in my cursed existence while I’m being drained of all resistance. Your perversion will not satisfy or stimulate, but it will destroy and annihilate. Your already ill fated and intoxicated. So tell me what is realistic to you my friend or are you misleading me to the very end? |
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| too me, this is very cunning -- not in a, i-have-fooled-you way . more like, you have abandoned me & Left me in this drowning-pool. justz too cut me down. [maybie i'm wrong] but in any case, i thought the poem was very intense. head-strong, not going to forfeit. i did like it (a lot) it made me feel - as if, even in darkness will still have power. good write ..... ~bloodstone fav line: To conceal what is truly false ...now that is fucking power ! | Posted on 2011-07-30 00:00:00 | by Bloodstone | [ Reply to This ] | i liked this one too, innocence is something that isn't valued much anymore, glad you wrote about it!! have a good day and i'll read more... | | Posted on 2008-01-08 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ] | god i love this one! you have read it to me...but i liked reading it too! | | Posted on 2007-06-13 00:00:00 | by Frivilous _ | [ Reply to This ] | |
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