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    dots Submission Name: Cant Stand To be Alonedots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Life Has moved on but im not ready to
    i love him so much
    and i cant help but appologise for everything


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    dotsCant Stand To be Alonedots
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    I hate it now your gone
    i cant stand to be alone
    i did nothing but love you
    but i must have done something wrong
    im sorry for all i ever did
    for the words that broke your heart
    i havent seen you in 2 weeks
    in that time ive torn apart
    i hate to be away from you
    my heart is starting to scar
    almost 8 months
    the best times of my life
    remember all the times we hugged
    the times you kissed my cheek
    its all those little memory's
    mean so much to me
    everyone is telling me to move on
    but im just not ready
    the ring you gave me
    is still on my finger
    its not going anywhere
    i hate to be without your love
    your smile just makes me melt
    i love you now and forever
    i wish i knew how you felt
    sorry sorry sorry
    please believe me
    i want you to be next to me
    i cant stand to be alone




    Submitted on 2007-06-01 02:29:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      good poem fell with heart felt words and honestly ..no lies no images just fears and tears
    I hope you get what you after ...take care
    | Posted on 2007-06-01 00:00:00 | by muhammed | [ Reply to This ]


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