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    dots Submission Name: PitFalldots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    18/F/Edmonton,AB, Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 142/116/83
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 171
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Wanting to let you in,
    Kinda hard,
    Considering the past,
    Trying to move on,
    Dazed in the momment,
    Torn from the brain & heart,
    Not knowing,
    which to choose.
    should i melt,
    should i remain stone,
    Love's the biggest pitfall,
    Falling for another,
    Letting control..
    Fly out the window,
    Allowing the breeze,
    To catch my hair,
    When the wind blows.




    Submitted on 2007-06-01 02:35:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a really good write where one can easily feel the chaotic state Love has a habit of putting one in
    You worded this very well
    I am looking forward to reading more writes from you in the future
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-06-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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