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    dots Submission Name: The Beauty Of A Rosedots
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    Author: LadyMustang
    ASL Info:    42, female, West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 222/171/71
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsThe Beauty Of A Rosedots
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    Their beauty such as no one knows,
    They come in many colors, the rose.

    Red petals are like flames of fire,
    They bring out one's desire.

    Yellow soft and glowing as the sun,
    its beauty is my favorite one.

    White is the purity in one's soul,
    For it is love that makes the world whole.

    Pink's is the petals that are one's sensual side,
    Its beauty comes from within and will not hide.

    Red and white, its beauty intertwined together,
    Is pure desire for each other forever.

    Purple shows its own beauty with such passion,
    To the eyes no other beauty can have such caption.

    Roses bring beauty to any room, When a man loves
    a woman his heart will choose the color of his love's bloom.

    Written By: Ladymustang




    Submitted on 2007-06-01 09:06:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Beautifully done!
    Makes me think of Juliett
    "....that which we call a rose by any other word
    would smell as sweet...."

    How about black roses? Are they birthed within nature or by a gardener’s hand?

    | Posted on 2007-07-11 00:00:00 | by theDevilsPocket | [ Reply to This ]
      This was extremely good.
    | Posted on 2007-06-04 00:00:00 | by Ur.Poems.Suck | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, i've always wanted to write something about roses and all their different colors but i never knew what to say about it, but i guess it's already been done for me.
    i really like how it's a basic rhyme, it made it all the better.
    the only one that kinda threw me off from the rhyming was:

    Red petals are like flames of fire,
    They bring out one's desire.

    everything it says is beautiful, but the missing syllable made it kind of incomplete.
    but, beautifully said and done.
    Peace<3


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    | Posted on 2007-06-01 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]



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