flexing some eye muscles.
i dribble a lot
not so good with words anymore.
they sort of bounce
and fall down
and i turn statements into yeah?
and you know what i mean?
because sometimes i need some clarification.
sometimes i need some FUCKING MIND BLOWING INTERCEPTION
AND NO YOU'RE NOT OKAY
IM TIRED OF YELLING SOMETIMES.
this is the only time i've grabbed my head to keep it down.
really. honest to god. i think absolutely sometimes.
extremists are either incredable dim or unparelellingly admired for.
i'm in between
now you tell me
i've got to practice my emotions at home.
get them right. get them easy.
i can't make sincerity if all i've got are knee jerks and realtime responses.
well. im not really sure what to say.
youve made it rather clear in your description that you dont give a damn about writing well so telling you to put this through a spell check and to think about your presentation a little more seems a little redundant somehow...
im not really sure you are actually saying anything in this piece.
perhaps its the inability to convey emotion in a reliable way when put on the spot... the flexing of eye muscles and drooling at the start and the practicing emotion at home toward the end of the piece.
im not sure your capitalised outburt is as effective as you seem to think it is.
man... i dunno... if youre not interested in listening i cant be bothered helping. i guess its as easy as that...