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    dots Submission Name: Love Or Lifedots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLove Or Lifedots
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    love or life
    is the question i ask
    which is more valuable
    to love is to live or so they say
    but what if the one you love
    doesnt love you back
    then you life is over
    or so it seems
    to many questions asked
    to many lies told
    give me a guy
    who knows what life holds
    forget the games you want to play
    just give me a man
    who only wants me
    give me the life
    that every gurls dreams
    i dont wanna be a princess
    dont wanna be a queen
    i wanna be your baby gurl
    the gurl of your dreams
    love or life
    is to much to ask
    dont plan the future
    forget the past
    nothing else matters
    but you and me
    cause you are the only man i see
    love or life
    i really dont care
    as long as im with you
    im happy anywhere




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