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    dots Submission Name: Can I Fix Youdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 558
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 906



    Description:
       This is Written To my Ex Boyfriend
    i Know your Having A Hard Time But I Am Too
    And I Really Want To Be With you Again And help You Through The Hard Time To Come


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    dotsCan I Fix Youdots
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    can i fix you
    help you pick your life up
    can i heal you heart
    the one i didnt mean to break
    can i hold your hand
    and not let you shake
    can i be you gurl
    through thick and thin
    can i love you
    no matter what you think
    can i hold you tight
    and never let you go
    can i show you love
    like you have never known
    we can work this out
    i know we can
    weve been through to much
    but i love you understand
    can i give you my heart
    for you to hold
    can i be your light
    through the storm
    can i be the one
    that you hold tight
    can you love me
    prove me right
    will you trust me
    to be true
    is it ok if i love you
    can i fix you
    i hate to see you broken
    its my fault i know
    but please let me fix you




    Submitted on 2007-06-02 04:39:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The only person who can fix someone is themselves. Work on fixing yourself before you even attempt to try and fix someone else.
    | Posted on 2007-06-04 00:00:00 | by Ur.Poems.Suck | [ Reply to This ]


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