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    dots Submission Name: Drafty Below The Equatordots
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    Author: caballero7137
    ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
    Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9/104/123
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDrafty Below The Equatordots
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    This is a circle,
    this is a square
    and this a triangle
    but where are
    my underwear?
    Iíve looked here
    and searched there
    but yet to find
    a single pair!

    Theyíre not in Jimmy Buffet
    or in my fatherís wallet,
    nor in my uncleís casket,
    but where are they?

    Itís not in the feta cheese
    or in the cheesy brownies
    nor in the stuffed turkey
    but where in hell are they?

    My tender back cheeks freeze
    from this bold winter breeze
    to which icy iota icicles
    twist my Life into crystals.

    Please find me some fabric
    that is measurable in metric
    in order to cover my conic
    that is longer than a chopstick.





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