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Drafty Below The Equator

Author: caballero7137
ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9 /104 /123
Words: 119
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Drafty Below The Equator

This is a circle,
this is a square
and this a triangle
but where are
my underwear?
I’ve looked here
and searched there
but yet to find
a single pair!

They’re not in Jimmy Buffet
or in my father’s wallet,
nor in my uncle’s casket,
but where are they?

It’s not in the feta cheese
or in the cheesy brownies
nor in the stuffed turkey
but where in hell are they?

My tender back cheeks freeze
from this bold winter breeze
to which icy iota icicles
twist my Life into crystals.

Please find me some fabric
that is measurable in metric
in order to cover my conic
that is longer than a chopstick.

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