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the dumb truck

Author: LameMansTerms
ASL Info:    36/M/Hermosa Beach, Ca
Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 713 /1012 /165
Words: 175
Class/Type: Lyrics /Society
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this a song.....kinda--if it is even music ? Verdict is still out.....well in some countries-lol

the dumb truck

The Dumb Truck
None of this is your fault
you don't listen to anyone at all-
it was a deliberate, inconsiderate
only to get rid of it assault.
None of this needs to be said
I may be breathing but I'm already dead-

++Watch me bleed
for our society
only to be free
I live for anarchy-
watch me bleed
for you and for me
only to be free
a hostage I never wanted to be++

You navigate the dumb truck
runnin into dumb luck again
two by two you cruise into
a world ....that's so corrupt-----

-the radio is on-
-but nothings in your head-
-the wind is in your hair-
-but you're never there-
-you just stare straight ahead-
-and say it's not my fault-
-it's never my fault-
-this is not my fault-

++watch me bleed
for you and for me
only to be me
I love anarchy
watch me bleed
selfishly for me
only to be free
a victim I never wanted to be++


Submitted on 2007-06-02 15:06:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  If its screamed real loud over terrible musicians, by some guy with an almost unrecognizable lyrical voice toward a mosh pit full of bloodied young people furious with their possibilities in this world,,,,,, cause most of them are just spoilt. Then yes It could pass as music/a song. Or if the artist sang it with their last dyeing pleading breaths of societal despair yeah it could pass like that as well I guess. The moral of the story? I’m not sure really, but perhaps don’t watch the news or listen to commercial radio or fall in love or anything crazy like that, it just rots out brains…. Yeah that’s about it I think.
It was interesting, different.
| Posted on 2007-06-03 00:00:00 | by Andz | [ Reply to This ]

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