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    dots Submission Name: *Se Quierodots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 776
    Average Vote:    2.0000
    Bytes: 156



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       not finished yet...it is spanish and english ..but ya enjoy..if u can understand...(but its not that sophisticated since i havent even completed my first year of spanish)


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    dots*Se Quierodots
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    Me besa
    with love on your lips
    Me toca
    with admiriration guilding you
    Me escucha
    with interest in your heart




    Submitted on 2007-06-02 18:19:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It sounds beautiful, even though I have no idea what the Spanish parts mean. Looks like I have some work to do. o--o;;
    | Posted on 2007-06-12 00:00:00 | by EbonyBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      Si Buena!!!

    I like this 1/2 & 1/2 piece - I love the mixing of languages and the reference to "IT" )

    I did one at a job where a fellow employee taught gave me lessons in German +)

    Keep on keepin on mija

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-06-03 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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