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    dots Submission Name: A lovers reunion dots
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    Author: stormkrow
    ASL Info:    24/ male / Montello Wi
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 51/52/39
    Words: 285
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsA lovers reunion dots
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    A LOVERS REUNION a duet
    between Jon and Ben
    by Peter Poff

    B: Can it realy be you my love
    B: I thought you were gone from my life
    B: Because reason said that you should have died three years ago

    J: I guess i took you by surprise
    J: I almost died three years ago
    J: they did not say what really happened to me then

    B: I should tell you that I am in a relationship
    J : Well good for you
    B: You made me how I am today
    J: What
    B: you made it hard for me to get close to anybody
    J:How
    B: By leaving me when i needed you the most maybe
    J: I am sorry I did not try
    B: Yeah , I know you did not try.....

    THE WAY YOU HELD ME
    Ben to Jon
    Peter Poff

    The way you held me in the moon light
    why did I throw it all away
    why dose it hurt so
    time and distance make us wise

    the way you held me in the moon light
    Why did I throw it all away
    for a stupid song of my own

    Time and Distance make us wise

    your hand holding mine the last thing on my mind
    time and distance make us wise
    our hands in eternal romance
    as this song dies
    time and distance make us wise

    the way you held me with the moonlight in your eyes .




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