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    dots Submission Name: Pulsing From The Heartdots
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    Author: caballero7137
    ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
    Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9/104/123
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsPulsing From The Heartdots
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    A girl has entered my mind
    and sprouted its healthy roots
    into a blossoming woman,
    with a perfect shade of red
    to complement and blend
    the ventricles of my heart.

    Iota grains of sand
    are constantly filled
    with engraving imageries
    and chisels symbols
    of her in my future.
    Despite only seeing words
    and not the human face
    that lies behind the pen,
    all I can feel
    for the one
    who holds my breath
    like a warming hug
    Is complete sincere LOVE

    As the sun sets
    and the southern winds
    ascend the moon in place,
    a droplet of hope
    abate the dreams into
    a nearing reality.









    Submitted on 2007-06-02 20:49:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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