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Pulsing From The Heart


Author: caballero7137
ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9 /104 /123
Words: 119
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Pulsing From The Heart



A girl has entered my mind
and sprouted its healthy roots
into a blossoming woman,
with a perfect shade of red
to complement and blend
the ventricles of my heart.

Iota grains of sand
are constantly filled
with engraving imageries
and chisels symbols
of her in my future.
Despite only seeing words
and not the human face
that lies behind the pen,
all I can feel
for the one
who holds my breath
like a warming hug
Is complete sincere LOVE

As the sun sets
and the southern winds
ascend the moon in place,
a droplet of hope
abate the dreams into
a nearing reality.









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