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Rambling Rhyme

Author:	Jessica Lynn
ASL Info:	22/f/mn
Elite Ratio:	2.86 - 121 /119 /57
Words:	174

Class/Type:	Poetry /Love
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lol. later that day i actually started dating this man. lol. but yeah. . .

Rambling Rhyme

I close my eyes, there you are.
You seem so close, and yet so far.
All I want is to be by your side.
To trust again, to keep my pride.
I need to be your one and only.
With the way it is now I feel so lonely.
Dreaming at night, dreaming in the day.
Yet when I speak to you I forget what to say.
When I can't stop thinking its so frustrating.
I can't help but wonder, can't stop contemplating.
What will it be like when you are mine?
What will happen and for how much time?
These questions, they haunt me, and so I daydream.
They make my eyes glitter and shine like sunbeams.
See what you do to me when you walk back in?
These thoughts make me giddy, it seems like a sin.
They say obsessed, I think in love.
I won't tell you that, till I know what you think of.
So many thoughts, so little time.
I can't carry on with this rambling rhyme!

Submitted on 2007-06-02 21:00:38 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I put the first eight lines in iambic tetrameter. Let me know if you like it.

I close my eyes and there you are
You seem so close and yet so far
My place, my dear, is by your side:
To trust again, to keep my pride
I need to be your one and only.
The way it's now I feel so lonely:
Awake by night, asleep by day
Yet when we speak there's naught to say.

When I can't stop thinking its so frustrating
I can't help but wonder, can't stop contemplating
What will it be like when you are mine
What will happen and for how much time
These questions, they haunt me, and so I daydream
They make my eyes glitter and shine like sunbeams
See what you do to me when you walk back in
These thoughts make me giddy, it seems like a sin
They say obsessed, I think in love
I won't tell you that, till I know what you think of

So many thoughts, so little time;
I need to stop this rambling rhyme!

| Posted on 2009-02-01 00:00:00 | by isselman2001 | [ Reply to This ]

Hey ...good to know u're dating the man behind this poem, seems u're in love , best of luck ! .
And I like the poem revealing the first signs of love ... good job.
* Drakoniss

| Posted on 2007-06-17 00:00:00 | by drakoniss | [ Reply to This ]

wow. i really like this one. it flows good. everything just seems in place. nice jod.

| Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by save me | [ Reply to This ]

I love this Baby Girl...........and i don't what to sya its great and you forever and Always Mi amor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

| Posted on 2007-06-02 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]

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