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    dots Submission Name: Assesdots
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    Author: DrewDilla
    ASL Info:    25/M/Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 131/196/51
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsAssesdots
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    I love the roundness of a girls ass,
    N there better not be a rash.
    cause I wont lick it then. If it flat then I wont beggin to get within your sin
    it got to be nice n round
    n no dinglebarries should be found
    in your ass hairs. Then it wouldnt be fare when your bare when I'm there
    After that big fuckin bash
    oh n I got plenty of cash
    Will do what ever u wanna do n it be for more then a few. You got a clue?
    Here you want a sound? "howwwwwwwwwww howwwwwwwwwwwwww howwww"
    ya I'm a true sex hound.
    That loves the butt. I'm a mut looking to bust a nut all over your gut.




    Submitted on 2007-06-03 06:59:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      omg!! rotflmao!! my fav part had to be:

    "N there better not be a rash.
    cause I wont lick it then. If it flat then I wont beggin to get within your sin
    it got to be nice n round
    n no dinglebarries should be found
    in your ass hairs."


    you lick ass?? hairy ass at that? LOL omg this was hilarioius!

    holy xx
    | Posted on 2007-10-24 00:00:00 | by Holy Wood | [ Reply to This ]
      well then...
    | Posted on 2007-06-03 00:00:00 | by Cricket | [ Reply to This ]
      lmfao.
    are you serious?
    this was... interesting. there were a couple of times where i burst out laughing but more out of disbelief.
    well... its different, isn't it?
    so, good work.
    | Posted on 2007-06-03 00:00:00 | by GiveMeTheGun | [ Reply to This ]


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