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Submission Name: daydream dots

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Author:	sbridges
ASL Info:	33/F/Los Angeles
Elite Ratio:	2.94 - 119/119/63
Words:	71

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	1012
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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daydream dots

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mind's eye floating
hidden ego gloating
secret desires roaming
tickling your dome and
fantastic situations on loan
surreal people moaning
your attractions controlling
'til you let it alone
freely soloing and
an adventure going
with the flow of a God of your owning
tho still within your means and growing
for a story completely satisfying and glowing
showing you what you want so
and telling you what you want to know...

Submitted on 2007-06-03 15:12:30 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
i can hear this being sung..
quietly and slowly.
just a thought.
| Posted on 2007-06-04 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]
hey that was pretty smooth flow. i didn't get much feeling out of it but it flows nice
| Posted on 2007-06-03 00:00:00 | by kristian | [ Reply to This ]

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