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Never Alone by Ron Cole


Author: elseibi
ASL Info:    20/f/uk
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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A real sweet poem Ron wrote for me about my grandma - who visits me whenever i can't sleep.

Thank you. xx


Never Alone by Ron Cole



Never Alone

I know now that I'm not alone,
cause you are always there.
When I awaken frightened,
your fingers caress my hair.

Your voice brings warmth and comfort
when my early morning dreams,
shatter sleep and make me weep,
you're always there, it seems!

I slumber now with confidence
that my fears will surely be known,
by my loving caring Nana
who makes sure I'm never alone!

A Poem For Lou
Ron Cole
June 2007




Submitted on 2007-06-03 16:57:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hey Lou!
Wassup!! How's things with you??? You busy???? ; )
I simply loved this write - "Never Alone" .................what a charming and heartwarming poem this is!!! I am glad you posted this....this deserves to be read by all! Its good to know that there always are people who care for you in the world........................and a loving grandmother can share a very special relationship with her grandchildren!

Great Write! : )
| Posted on 2007-06-07 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
  Interesting...Short and to the point, and, as Ron's work tends to be, very rhythm-based.

Sounds like you're lucky as far as family is concerned.

--crimson
| Posted on 2007-06-05 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
  I love this poem :) I would say something more, but got post-exam brain ache lol
| Posted on 2007-06-04 00:00:00 | by Lord Bane | [ Reply to This ]
  Hi Lou!

I'm delighted you posted this! I hope you liked it!
| Posted on 2007-06-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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