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    dots Submission Name: Never Alone by Ron Coledots
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    Author: elseibi
    ASL Info:    20/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 228/180/38
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       A real sweet poem Ron wrote for me about my grandma - who visits me whenever i can't sleep.

    Thank you. xx


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    dotsNever Alone by Ron Coledots
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    Never Alone

    I know now that I'm not alone,
    cause you are always there.
    When I awaken frightened,
    your fingers caress my hair.

    Your voice brings warmth and comfort
    when my early morning dreams,
    shatter sleep and make me weep,
    you're always there, it seems!

    I slumber now with confidence
    that my fears will surely be known,
    by my loving caring Nana
    who makes sure I'm never alone!

    A Poem For Lou
    Ron Cole
    June 2007




    Submitted on 2007-06-03 16:57:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey Lou!
    Wassup!! How's things with you??? You busy???? ; )
    I simply loved this write - "Never Alone" .................what a charming and heartwarming poem this is!!! I am glad you posted this....this deserves to be read by all! Its good to know that there always are people who care for you in the world........................and a loving grandmother can share a very special relationship with her grandchildren!

    Great Write! : )
    | Posted on 2007-06-07 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting...Short and to the point, and, as Ron's work tends to be, very rhythm-based.

    Sounds like you're lucky as far as family is concerned.

    --crimson
    | Posted on 2007-06-05 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this poem :) I would say something more, but got post-exam brain ache lol
    | Posted on 2007-06-04 00:00:00 | by Lord Bane | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi Lou!

    I'm delighted you posted this! I hope you liked it!
    | Posted on 2007-06-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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