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    dots Submission Name: The World: In a Nutshelldots
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    Author: black_beauty18
    ASL Info:    25/Female/Hutchinson, KS
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 153/146/46
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Just writing on my own personal views of the world... Let me know what you think, whether you agree, disagree, or just don't know!


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    dotsThe World: In a Nutshelldots
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    War.
    Murder.
    Senseless acts of violence.


    Sorrow.
    Tragedy.
    Taking it all in silence.


    A smile.
    A wave.
    A random act of kindness.


    Hoping.
    Praying.
    Looking to God for guidance.




    Submitted on 2007-06-03 21:13:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow, this echoes a poem i wrote on memorial day called "humanity's history." the world is in a sad state, but we can find the beauty, like you say, in a smile, a random act of kindness...
    and i always look to the Divine for guidance in life.

    short and to the point. i agree..

    peace,
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2007-06-04 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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