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    dots Submission Name: Chasing Ghostsdots
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    Author: RedRoseofBlood
    ASL Info:    17/f/outsideyourwindow
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 590/581/134
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 107
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    dotsChasing Ghostsdots
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    He waits
    Silent like a marsh
    You forgot
    Echoes that bring only pain
    Going nowhere

    In the time
    It takes your cigarette to burn
    He will be gone
    Going nowhere

    His thumb outstretched
    Looking anything but lost
    You didn't call
    He gets in the cab of a truck
    Going nowhere

    He sips the last of his beer
    Not as composed as he appears
    Sitting alone with only thoughts of you
    Going nowhere




    Submitted on 2007-06-04 11:01:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it, it seems to be refering to a drifter image in my view, im not much of a fan for brief poetry but i like the idea of someone here and then gone like they were never there
    | Posted on 2007-06-05 00:00:00 | by Seraphim X | [ Reply to This ]



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