Your Poems Suck -------------------------------------------
Look
It's a bird in the sky and it's flying
Isn't that neat
Hey what you said was so cool
We must be soulmates
I love you
Will you be my online lover?
I can't handle real relationships
So it will be fine
Let's masturbate to that thought together
at 10 p.m. my time, 6 a.m. your time
and it will be like we are together having sex
Maybe there is milk in my nose
I laughed so hard
I don't know how to write anything good
and I don't want to buy a diary so I vent
and call it poetry
Some people call it art or a form of expression
I just call it ranting
I've got them fooled
and I've got their sympathy
Two birds in one basket
Look
It's a rock
How romantic
It reminds me of you
Unable to expand because it can't think
I don't know how to form sentences
So I type one or two word lines
and let the reader fill in the blanks
because I don't want to think about
having to put effort into it
but it works well with our A.D.D.
Stumbled over
My
Own
Tongue
In gardens
Made artificial
Emotions
Now wasn't that easy and thought provoking?
Leave a comment below about what you read above
To prove to me that I am right
that not only can't you write
but your comprehension skills need improvement too
Or are you one that gets your inspiration
from those little magnets they sell?
I am reposting this comment to you,
Please think when commenting on peoples
writings,they can only take so much hurtful
comments till they go at you until you understand why they are attcking you,
well you know what they say different strokes
for different folks
not all are born with a
Whitman or a Poe mind right?
i see you are new here i read your journal sounds like someone piss-ed in your wheaties
every writer has something to say some will
like what they read and give a good critique.
some will pass it by without saying word
so continue to read the work here at this site and comment on how you see fit.
just remember if your comments are harsh or hurtful. their heads will rear and bite back welcome aboard dude or dudette
the comment you said that 93 % of people here suck has put you in the situation you are now in
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