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    dots Submission Name: remembrancedots

    Author: DontLetGo421
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 118/238/141
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    straining my brain for more, but all is just a blur

    was it a dream ? i'd tell you, but i'm just not so sure

    within this dreamland , or life you say

    why is it only you can see it clear as day?

    Submitted on 2007-06-04 17:00:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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