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remembrance


Author: DontLetGo421
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remembrance



straining my brain for more, but all is just a blur

was it a dream ? i'd tell you, but i'm just not so sure

within this dreamland , or life you say

why is it only you can see it clear as day?




Submitted on 2007-06-04 17:00:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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