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The Mixes Make the Madness

Author: taramarie
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The Mixes Make the Madness

Or something dull like that.

I'm shattered
back in the urban strawl
with a heart that has hardened
and a hope that has started to haunt.

all my masks have been
worn through...
my every move is easily
seen and reduced to
spectators ash.

I don't know how i become
loved or where the boat
will need to dock.

but here i am.
twenty years old and
over it.

his feelings, her ego
oh fuck off.
i'm busy looking up ways
to remember who i

The only real love that ever
mattered was severed
from me.
And like every other
amputee i can
sometimes feel what
was cut off of me.

the dreams are
cracking me open.
creaking and erupting
im falling all over the floor,
in bits and pieces.

Fumbling & bumbling
I'm your girl.

Submitted on 2007-06-04 20:00:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i hate sadness.
| Posted on 2007-06-05 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
  Dang, you've got it bad. This is pretty flippin awesome. I feel you compleatly. The hurt, the frustration. Very beautifuly worded.
| Posted on 2007-06-04 00:00:00 | by Peachpitt | [ Reply to This ]

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