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    dots Submission Name: My Silent Pleadots
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    Author: EsCaPisT
    ASL Info:    17,Female,Singapore
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 42/38/38
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMy Silent Pleadots
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    I pray for you to be watched over
    I yearn for you to be safe
    I long for you to find happiness
    I wish for you to stay the same
    Protected and showered
    With love and affection
    As we walk hand in hand
    With the smile you gave me
    When i first learned your name.




    Submitted on 2007-06-04 21:30:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "When i first learnt your name" should be When I first learned your name. Other than that this was really good.
    | Posted on 2007-06-05 00:00:00 | by Ur.Poems.Suck | [ Reply to This ]


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