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    dots Submission Name: You better love medots
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    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 190/178/112
    Words: 413
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 116
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2548



    Description:
       more lyrics from the fr.; tell me guys... what you really think... alright then!


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    dotsYou better love medots
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    No I could never say I was needy
    Oh I am clever & yes very greedy
    It's just , ahhh
    It's just how I claimed the day
    You know, it could always change
    But, you know my secrets that I dare to give
    Only to simple & only to you
    Oh, baby, it just seems that way
    With no care in the world and no energy
    You better still love me

    chorus: Cause you're sitting steady
    Sunlight shining right behind your shoulder there
    Be where you are now & be full of love no matter what
    This just something I came across today
    for me & you
    Oh, yeah, for me & you

    They think if they disown me or make off with something of mine
    It's gonna be so easy to get on by
    But, hold on tight because there's more of where this all came from
    But, it seems the same
    Oh, baby, it just seems that way
    With no care in the world and no energy
    You better still love me
    Yes you know you better...

    chorus: Cause you're sitting steady
    Sunlight shining right behind your shoulder there
    Be where you are now & be full of love no matter what
    This just something I came across today
    for me & you
    Oh, yeah, for me & you

    Just listen
    Listen for a change
    Digging in the ground because there's nothing in atmosphere
    Don't believe in everything you hear
    But, I will divulge to you everything, eventually...
    Oh, baby, it just seems that way
    With no care in the world and no energy
    You better still love me
    Yes you know you better...

    chorus: Cause you're sitting steady
    Sunlight shining right behind your shoulder there
    Be where you are now & be full of love no matter what
    This just something I came across today
    for me & you
    Oh, yeah, for me & you

    Some days there's patience & some not at all
    It's in my nutrition or just how it is
    Some days it's easy & others I can't contain
    Why are you holding on?
    Why are you holdin on to me?
    You know I didn't really push you in
    You fell
    Yes you fell right in with me
    Oh, baby, it just seems that way
    With no care in the world and no energy
    You better still love me
    Yes you know you better...




    Submitted on 2007-06-05 02:26:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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