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    dots Submission Name: Come and Seedots

    Author: Kera
    ASL Info:    18-f-NH
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 116/129/29
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Misc/Dark
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    dotsCome and Seedots

    Follow me:
    And you will see a land
    A land of grief and sorrow.
    A place in which people cry black tears
    One where they breathe a crimson halo.

    Join me:
    And we can venture
    To a sacred and barren space.
    A site where death dare not go
    Somewhere complete with great disgrace.

    Meet me:
    And together we stay
    With creatures that drink their fear.
    A spot of an eternal being
    A holy land to which we disappear.

    Submitted on 2007-06-05 19:23:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      interesting as always.. we all have this land somewhere in our mind.. it's interesting you can stand it.. it has a way of driving people crazy.. but you did a good job on this one
    | Posted on 2007-06-06 00:00:00 | by Pyrosis | [ Reply to This ]

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