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    dots Submission Name: he only recognises me when I wear my McDeath shirtdots
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    Author: flyfire
    ASL Info:    17, Female, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 33/19/14
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       ... thoughts can be almost physically tangible ... people who have deeper thoughts are often ignored or lost in the culture of me me me ...


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    dotshe only recognises me when I wear my McDeath shirtdots
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    a face is easily forgotten ...
    even when it lives colourful thoughts
    and makes rhythm in his room.




    Submitted on 2007-06-06 01:51:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow simple and true.
    | Posted on 2007-06-06 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ]


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