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    dots Submission Name: deaddots
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    Author: xoxlonleysoalxo
    ASL Info:    14/f/australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
    Total Views: 597
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 322



    Description:
       its kinda morbid but who cares


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    i cover my eyes and crying.
    what do we have hearts they just brake.
    i feel the walls closing in on me its suffacating me dragging me down towards the ground pulling steaching ripping me apart i feel the blood drip from my eyes as my body is getting taken over by bugs im just wishing it would be over




    Submitted on 2007-06-06 06:09:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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