BeINg by Epiphany

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Submission Name: BeINg dots

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Author:	Epiphany
ASL Info:	42/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:	4.38 - 3342/2139/390
Words:	57

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	597
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Bytes:	475

Description:
one of those that presents "IT"self

Happy Daze and love,peace,joy,laughs and smiles to share

tif

BeINg

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I close my eyes
enveloping the color
purple swirled with
green ~~

Or is "IT"
the color
becoming me
Divine Healing
seen?

Energetic
vibrations
feeling
titilations

I am
waking dream
Spiritual Light
Beam

I am
rainbow
and pot of gold
The warmth
and chilling cold

Submitted on 2007-06-06 13:34:25 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I too would like to see more it doesn't seem this train of though was brought to it's conclusion. It's as if it's been istitutionalized so our eyes can't realize it's true beauty. I am that I am. it'd be nice to se It brough further. peace
| Posted on 2007-06-24 00:00:00 | by shaman | [ Reply to This ]
  It seems you're being and becoming more all the time Tiff.
The angels have a way of finding us here and from above
and the discovery of who we are is what religion really is.
I know you didn't ask for reflection but it seems that finding
who we are and living it is the most sacred work we can do.

Sweet reverence to you for sending us the love you do.
Beautiful! Love too,

Nan

| Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice description and your word usage is quite vivid. This lends to complementing this piece substantially.

Well done rainbow girl.

PHP.
| Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  purple and green sure do go together well, don't they?

I just loved the last stanza:

"I am
rainbow
and pot of gold
The warmth
and chilling cold"

Makes me feel light. Light as in weightless, Light as in shining forth.

"They're always after me pot of gold! That and me lucky charms too!"

Are you the leprechaun's pot of gold. You are a treasure of legend, my dear tiff.

| Posted on 2007-06-08 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
  beautiful, ladyshines.. i love the purple and green (my two favourite colours!)..

the going into yourself to fine the Divine is, well, divine! you become one with IT, and that is the way it should be. and the "chilling cold" is all a part of IT. we must envelop the cold so as to know how healing the warmth can be.

beauty!

love&blessings,
~Cat
| Posted on 2007-06-07 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
  It sounds like you have a high esteem of yourself. I like that. You should. You are a good person. Keep posting. I really like this a lot.

tina
| Posted on 2007-06-07 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this, but would like to see it be longer. You have a gift for making words glow so I would like to see this write blind me, right now it's a glare, leaving me waiting for more. love ya.
| Posted on 2007-06-06 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]

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