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    Author: Ur.Poems.Suck
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 61/28/3
    Words: 817
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Society
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    I have completed what I set out to prove here and I completed it in a timely fashion and am proud of myself for that. This will most likely be the last time I will log on here and just wanted to say one more thing. I have received quite a few mixed reviews on my two posts and have to say a couple of them caught my eye.
    They are as follows:




    “I'm commenting on this due to the fact that several have come to me asking if this was my alias.

    Hell no. This satire is a joke. Anyone knows I can outdo this proleptic garbage.

    The writers of elite skills do NOT suck. And your work merits you no bearing to trash another's.

    Persist and I will cash you out.

    MyX”

    This next one is an excerpt from a writer named Sachenka:

    “…but beware if you are who Myx says you are don't let the door hit you on the assets on your way out.”




    First off MyX, proleptic is the wrong use of word there. Its definition basically means to make an assumption. The write in which you left that comment on makes no assumptions and is based on observations. Observations made over the course of time that are true of this and many other writing websites.

    Now back to my point. Those comments lead me to believe that the Constitutional Freedom of Speech right is not factored in to the way of thinking by the powers that be on this website. Apparently this character who they think I am did or said something and got banished from this website based on who knows what. I know not who they speak of and quite frankly really don’t care what the situation was that led to their expulsion from this site. I just wanted to say that if this is the kind of place where they preach freedom of expression yet turn around and banish people because they express a certain viewpoint or opinion it is probably something that people should be aware of. It is no wonder why many of you write and comment with kid gloves on. If you don’t you might get banished or ridiculed. How sad. Luckily I have strong enough will power that ridicule and banishment doesn’t bother me.

    Rather than just ignoring me or writers like me most people choose to ban and/or ridicule us because we have no fear of using the Freedom of Speech in public forums. I see they have an Ignore Writer option on this website. Why don’t people use it on me? If I am so bad and my words upset them that much then why don’t they just ignore me? If they don’t want people to join this site and express themselves how they want then why don’t they charge a monthly fee or conduct a screening process before allowing new members?

    So go ahead and “cash me out” as you say. Instead of ignoring me, go ahead and just ignore that first amendment instead. If you are going to banish me for being what you call an obnoxious ass then perhaps you should banish Dairy Queen as well for being one too, and MyX for leaving that “…I will cash you out.” remark that certain people in this post 9/11 world would consider to be a death threat. Oh and MyX, another’s shouldn’t have an apostrophe in it like how you have it in the comment you left. If you are going to try and use apostrophes please try to use them properly.

    Before I go, I wanted to give special attention to a couple of writers that have made this experiment very entertaining.

    1. lildudespider: You are one crazy little fellow and I admire your attitude and fearlessness. Don’t let these people here get to you. I think your idea will be a hit and you should pitch it to a pharmaceutical company. The sooner, the better.
    2. D.Q. (or Dairy Queen as I call him): Bantering with you was entertaining. Not only does your skill of websurfing on photobucket show that there are still men in their mid-twenties that have the mentality of an eight year old boy that gets picked last on the playground, but it re-affirms the notion that perhaps certain people should not be allowed to breed until they are at least thirty five years old.

    Well kids I hope you have all learned something from this experience that will help you all grow up to be fine, upstanding citizens and maybe even better writers.




    Submitted on 2007-06-06 14:51:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Lmfao. Death threat.
    | Posted on 2007-06-07 00:00:00 | by GiveMeTheGun | [ Reply to This ]
      Well put DQ...but I'm going to RETURN to Writer'sCafe. I have a point to make.

    By the way...proleptic also can mean to anticipate argument which is why you came to elites and smeared your $hit in the first place.

    Second of all...anothers' is incorrect. And another can not be used in plural form. No wonder your writing sucks.

    MyX
    | Posted on 2007-06-06 00:00:00 | by MyX | [ Reply to This ]



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