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    dots Submission Name: **Life's Enddots

    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 789
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       I actually wrote this for a contest that required the author to use the word life in the title, but no where else in the poem, and also required the use of colours and sounds.
    I hope you Enjoy!

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    dots**Life's Enddots

    You're coming, closer
    Adjacent to the brown floor boards
    When in the matter of three seconds
    Footsteps fall heavily
    Cladding upon dust covered wood
    Bang, Bang, Bang.
    Red banned wrapped tightly
    Around a filthy arm
    Teal eyes stare down upon yours
    Superior to yours
    Religion the only difference
    Heaven calls your soul up
    Towards blue skies
    To be freed from the living Hell.

    Submitted on 2007-06-06 14:56:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i didnt like this at first. then i read it a second and a third time and changed my mind. i could close my eyes and picture this happening to me. good use of words and colors. the ending didnt suit me but otherwise i enjoyed. wooo!
    | Posted on 2007-06-06 00:00:00 | by lark | [ Reply to This ]

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