fishing hiku by eagle wing

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Submission Name: fishing hiku dots

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Author:	eagle wing
ASL Info:	15/m/OH
Elite Ratio:	3.24 - 29/33/23
Words:	14

Class/Type:	Haiku/Nature
Total Views:	119
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	79

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fishing hiku dots

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when one fishes of what more do you catch?
the fish?
or the bait?

Submitted on 2007-06-06 20:28:18 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
This is pretty good, but I just wanted to tell you what a haiku really is.

It's a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables.
Ha.. got that out of a dictionary.

I'm not really a haiku kind of person, but as I said, this one is pretty good.

Keep on writing,
Lisa

| Posted on 2007-06-06 00:00:00 | by Nani | [ Reply to This ]

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