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    dots Submission Name: fishing hikudots
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    Author: eagle wing
    ASL Info:    15/m/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 29/34/24
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Haiku/Nature
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    dotsfishing hikudots
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    when one fishes of what more do you catch?
    the fish?
    or the bait?




    Submitted on 2007-06-06 20:28:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is pretty good, but I just wanted to tell you what a haiku really is.

    It's a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables.
    Ha.. got that out of a dictionary.

    I'm not really a haiku kind of person, but as I said, this one is pretty good.

    Keep on writing,
    Lisa
    | Posted on 2007-06-06 00:00:00 | by Nani | [ Reply to This ]


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