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    dots Submission Name: the scribbles on your walldots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsthe scribbles on your walldots
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    in some sort of soft patterned future
    i'll adore you
    the light carroming off the waters crest
    like lush red apples
    floating down an icy childhood river
    in early october
    the scent of costumes in the air
    as leaves cling to your disheveled hair

    the ash that i rubbed on your forehead
    remembers me
    and i,
    with the ancient parchment
    of my middle eye
    inside you
    & the dark birds of autumn
    flowing through my hands

    dreams know nothing
    of the joking, sullen heart
    except for when the line appears
    and tears
    become as comfortable as jewelery
    like the necklace that i made for you
    from the scribbles on your wall

    this is me saying goodbye




    Submitted on 2007-06-07 01:00:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "and tears
    become as comfortable as jewelery
    like the necklace that i made for you
    from the scribbles on your wall"

    and become comfortable jewlry as mine own eyes do lie the lines are a bittersweet symphony of unrelenting pain. like summer air. art my love art

    forever in your shadow
    | Posted on 2007-06-18 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh it's the same thing as your other one, I clicked on it thinking it was a mistake or maybe an old version, but its the same thing, only in the end you say good-bye.

    Why is that?

    It makes the whole thing seem so sad, and before I never looked at it that way. I am so sorry if things in your life arent going well or something, but maybe you just write whatever.

    I still like it, and I have the first one I read on my faves, not much difference in them, maybe I overlooked the good-bye part on the other one and this is a mistake?

    I dont know, I am confused now. I have to look again.... ahg...

    necrotic
    | Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by necrotic | [ Reply to This ]


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