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    dots Submission Name: For Your Dewy Eyes...dots
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    Author: Parul garg
    ASL Info:    26/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    6.11 - 239/100/30
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
    Total Views: 201
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 362



    Description:
       A bit of melancholia...


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    dotsFor Your Dewy Eyes...dots
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    I.
    For your dewy eyes,
    Blink down that tear O angel!!
    Your lord has espied.


    II.
    Pure transparent bliss,
    Wistarias are sacred yet
    Enchant and entice.


    III.
    Such secrets I keep,
    My heart dare not stay silent
    My lips dare not speak.






    Submitted on 2007-06-07 12:46:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think this could of been a little longer , it was so good I wanted more (smile),
    Thanks for sharing.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-25 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      I tend to think that ALL is relative to nature and I love the use of the minimalistic yet poetically powerful haiku!

    I enjoyed the three together and as standalones - well done!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-08-15 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      i always believe haikus dealt with the natural world. your suject matter in this set is more related to inner feelings and perceptions. do not get me wrong, the haiku form is much effective hear and by limting description you have selected the bet word choice to get your pont across.

    not a bad read and i hope you find more inspiration.


    have fun and good luck,

    ash
    | Posted on 2007-06-07 00:00:00 | by SincerWritinAsh | [ Reply to This ]



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