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    dots Submission Name: Never Againdots
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    Author: AnnaBullen707
    ASL Info:    14/Female/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 16/48/48
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
    Total Views: 120
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 653



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       ** PS.) I wrote this a while ago, long before I head that song "Never Again", so sorry if the title sounds generic or reused! Who knew Kelly Clarkson would be copying off of me?? lol :)


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    dotsNever Againdots
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    Never again
    We are through
    It was a fun ride
    Even though not a word of it was true
    But like all the people you proved right told me
    There's simply no putting any trust into you

    Never again
    Psh, leaving wasnt so sad
    In the back of my mind
    I was just waiting for it to go bad
    And I know thers no point
    In missing what we never had

    Never again
    Ill tell you, I am FINE
    Its really not like
    It was the first time
    I will never say I want you back
    Cus I dont waste my time coveting what will never be mine





    Submitted on 2007-06-07 20:18:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like htis piece a lot. it show a lot of anger though. and selfish hidden feeling. its like too much pride. like your trying to convince the other person, along with yourself, that youd ont need them to make you happy. that you didnt believe them but you wanted to. if you didnt care, why would you give them the time of you work. you are a good writer and you can take your work far. try not to post so many in a row. people wont read all of them. you have have a lot missed. wait for the other to be commented on before you post. if not you might be disappointed when people dont comment. good work overall.






    tina
    | Posted on 2007-06-07 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]



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