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    dots Submission Name: Bitch, please..dots
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    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    17/f/ tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.88 - 297/159/67
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 182
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    dotsBitch, please..dots
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    I've cried so many tears
    my eyes have run dry.
    Call me heartless,
    but I think I'll get by.

    Why waste my time
    crying over you?
    I've been taught my lesson.
    What else would I do?

    Ask you to take me back
    as I beg on my knees?
    Stay heartbroken forever?
    Oh bitch, please !

    The only thing
    this breakup has done
    is open my eyes.
    Independence I've won.

    Why don't I miss your sorry ass,
    or think that we belong?
    You can spend your life wondering
    where the hell YOU went wrong.




    Submitted on 2007-06-08 10:29:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked the title it made me LOL and it was a good poem! very much to the point!
    | Posted on 2007-07-10 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]
      i know you want us to bash it but i do like it. i cant help it. i know a lot of people will relate to it. keep posting.




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    | Posted on 2007-06-08 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]



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