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    dots Submission Name: Dark Waterdots
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    Author: ZaiakuSin
    ASL Info:    18/m/canada
    Elite Ratio:    0.69 - 3/116/12
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 88
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1340



    Description:
       well this is what I wrote for someone special to me


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    dotsDark Waterdots
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    &#65279;Dark water breaks
    The moonlight showers over you
    The waves crash into the rocks
    The light of the moon lightens your heart.

    Shadows and Darkness
    The waves carry souls
    You hear the screams
    As the sea below you roll

    Shades of gray
    Dark as the night
    Dressed to Depress
    To end all the torment

    Spark from above
    Shining light falls
    Down to the cliff
    Off it to a dive

    Leaping off
    Grasping the light
    Fall from grace
    In this angels flight

    Wings spread
    This dark raven soars
    Wave sprays over their bodies
    The raven sees his catch

    A small dove
    so frail and lonely
    Crying and trembling
    In the mighty ravens grasp

    Back on the top
    He released the dove
    It hurried away
    He looked back to the sea

    Alone again
    The raven sits alone
    Something coos
    The raven snaps around

    The dove stands alone
    barely a sound
    She hops back to the ravens side
    She nuzzles him

    The raven looks down
    Surprised by the action
    He looks at her
    And for the first time...

    He smiles




    Submitted on 2007-06-08 11:03:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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