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Submission Name:
Dark Water
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Author:
ZaiakuSin
ASL Info:
18/m/canada
Elite Ratio:
0.69 - 3/116/12
Words:
188
Class/Type:
Poetry/Love
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Description:
well this is what I wrote for someone special to me
Dark Water
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Dark water breaks
The moonlight showers over you
The waves crash into the rocks
The light of the moon lightens your heart.
Shadows and Darkness
The waves carry souls
You hear the screams
As the sea below you roll
Shades of gray
Dark as the night
Dressed to Depress
To end all the torment
Spark from above
Shining light falls
Down to the cliff
Off it to a dive
Leaping off
Grasping the light
Fall from grace
In this angels flight
Wings spread
This dark raven soars
Wave sprays over their bodies
The raven sees his catch
A small dove
so frail and lonely
Crying and trembling
In the mighty ravens grasp
Back on the top
He released the dove
It hurried away
He looked back to the sea
Alone again
The raven sits alone
Something coos
The raven snaps around
The dove stands alone
barely a sound
She hops back to the ravens side
She nuzzles him
The raven looks down
Surprised by the action
He looks at her
And for the first time...
He smiles
Submitted on 2007-06-08 11:03:15
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