Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Calcium Depositsdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: ZaiakuSin
    ASL Info:    18/m/canada
    Elite Ratio:    0.69 - 3/116/12
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 85
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 648



    Description:
        I am so ashamed with this.....I mean come on i ask for a topic adn i get Calcium deposits


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsCalcium Depositsdots
    -------------------------------------------


    In my sink
    there is a stain
    It breaks the link
    Between porcelain and drain

    A simple spot of rust
    Or a calcium deposit
    I only hope, looking at the dust
    To clear it with some Comet

    Oh stubborn spot
    Why won't you come out?
    My arm will probably rot
    As I scrub with some Shout

    Another sees the stain
    And gives me a holler
    My arm in intense pain
    As they say, "Did you try using water?"

    Right then and there
    I drop dead on the spot
    I've given up
    And that stain can rot




    Submitted on 2007-06-08 11:16:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Wow I like it. It's different then most of the things I've read on this site. Good Write.
    | Posted on 2007-06-13 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.