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    dots Submission Name: Promise To You Momdots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    18/F/Edmonton,AB, Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 142/116/83
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 124
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    Description:
       Written by my bestfriend Ashley, her mom recently passed away.


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    dotsPromise To You Momdots
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    Hush,
    It will all be over soon.
    Hear the heavens sing their tune.
    Promise I won't leave this room.



    No,
    These aren't tears, i don't cry.
    There's just something in my eye.
    Promise that it's not a lie.



    Please,
    Know that you can own my heart;
    That you've had it from the start.
    Promise we won't be apart.



    Peace,
    It will all just fade away,
    There's no pain after today,
    And my promises will stay.




    Submitted on 2007-06-08 13:37:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It is really touching and very beautifully written... it even hurts to see our parents growing old but this tragedy.... i believe Ashley is a very understanding, nice girl... this poem simply breaks the heart but also holds out hope about what lies beyond....

    Take care,
    parul.
    | Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by Parul garg | [ Reply to This ]



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