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    dots Submission Name: My Knightdots
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    Author: AnnaBullen707
    ASL Info:    14/Female/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 16/48/48
    Words: 443
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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    dotsMy Knightdots
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    I was a broken prisoner
    Hurt too many times
    My heart was lost in the endless tears
    Held back by others crimes

    This could have been the reason
    I jumped so at the chance
    To heal my soul and fix my pride
    With another sweet romance

    My knight came on a blackened steed
    Appeared he were the one
    With lips he felt and with hands he spoke
    Of the courtship he had won

    The days of June were sunny
    And they led onto July
    Soon August came and August went
    To recall the months gone by...

    He chased me in the summer fields
    And kissed me by the moon
    But his grace was pure while the rhythm soft
    So I danced on to that tune

    Perhaps I gave too quickly
    To let him take me yonder
    But whatever the way whatever the cause
    His eyes began to wonder

    At first for just an instant
    And then a longing stare
    Hed turn from me and gaze at her
    Without a shame or care

    But still he saw my pining
    And unlike a monster said
    That he loved me so, and did no wrong
    To make me smile instead

    But the words he spoke were nothing
    From a man who all but failed
    For him I tried; made a happy face
    But behind closed doors I wailed

    On till finally I knew it
    Id lose him to her will
    So the shock that came on the next cold words
    Would not so surely kill

    Sweet pollen grazed his forehead
    He bent and said alas
    He could not stay; his duty called
    But he cherished all the passed

    And yet his words were mocking
    They aimed to hit; to scorn
    He did not go for valiant things
    But for what he found adorn

    So again I was in b o n d a ge
    Led away to d e a t h
    Money and riches could save me not
    Only the sound of his breath

    Like a man condemned to to t o r t u r e
    Id pace, and cry and see
    The g irl he sought; the gi rl he loved
    As once he did with me

    And I readied for the coming
    My ex ecution set
    And like I had done so many times before
    I went, weighed by regret

    And so the tale there ended
    Cut short, I wouldnt cry
    For the one person I thought would save me
    That just left me there to d i e








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