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    dots Submission Name: The Mystique: For A Poet Unknown...dots
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    Author: Parul garg
    ASL Info:    26/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    6.15 - 241/100/30
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       the mystique of true, inspired artist..... they come in every age...


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    dotsThe Mystique: For A Poet Unknown...dots
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    The whole continuum of life
    I see on rocks inscribed,
    And someone did it
    Thousands of years back.
    A poet's throbbing being
    On boulders lies revealed,
    And the green turquoise river
    Is the only one to read,
    And this is not her business
    To remember all the lines
    This is the power of verse itself
    That possesses the heart to depths...

    Even time's inexorable march stops by
    To glance at stones apotheosized
    It spares the rocks from destruction
    And for a long time it is due...
    But who dare scath this Lord's hymn
    That vibrates through the sinews of time.





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      Another job well done. This is on my favs for sure parul.
    | Posted on 2007-08-27 00:00:00 | by Megsrus aka Meg | [ Reply to This ]
      You really got me whirring with inescapable thought thought while reading this piece. Your imagery, combined with your paying homage to timely words rarely seen was quite captivating for me. I must now read more of your submissions for they promise to deliver.
    | Posted on 2007-06-23 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      I think here you are describing eternal art sculpted by the master artist himself! This poem is profound, intriguing, and delightful! Nice work, Parul!
    | Posted on 2007-06-21 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I used to travel terrains in New Mexico, Utah and Colorado where one could witness these painted-rock musings; some in Colorado even portrayed space-like ships and this piece brought me back to those travels.

    I thought of this today, too, when I was writing/drawing in the sand and the river would lap upon the shore and once again there was a blank slate.

    I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you for sharing

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Cave paintings? I've had a little trouble deciding whether you're talking of something you have actually seen or something purely in your imagination. If it is the latter then it is an excellent creation.

    I thoroughly enjoyed this. I too think that every age, every generation, every place and time has its poets. They take different forms but they all provide the same function, to track 'The whole continuum of life', step by step.

    Thanks for a really interesting read.
    | Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by Predator | [ Reply to This ]


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