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    dots Submission Name: What Do You Seedots

    Author: bleeding_sin
    ASL Info:    16/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 54/68/57
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 536
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 308

       I don't see why two people want me. 6/8/07

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    dotsWhat Do You Seedots

    Can you feel that?
    That's my heart coming back together
    Not breaking
    No tears
    How could you love me?
    There's nothing to love
    I see in gray
    No life in my vains
    No color in my eyes
    Just tell me why?
    Why you love me

    Submitted on 2007-06-09 13:14:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i ask him the same question all the time. i hope you dont mind if i use this for a second. i love this. keep posting. i cant believe no one commented on this yet. people are wierd. i like your work.

    | Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]

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