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    dots Submission Name: Words I Hope To Once Be True.dots
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    Author: DrewDilla
    ASL Info:    25/M/Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 131/196/51
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 1263
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 818



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    dotsWords I Hope To Once Be True.dots
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    When you look I book to you cause you like glue I cant stop thinkin of you.

    Just about every 2 minutes itís you I have to be within n itís like your pleasure never ends.

    Without you Iím in complete loneliness. Iím just askin you to hold me please. I think I got the keys.

    To unlock your hearts love. Which starts above . The smarts of a dove.

    My finger tips are really quick, and Iím slow with my dick, and got a lovely lick.

    and your hips Iíll suck with my lips along with your tits. I donít need any tool kits.
    Iím a gift from the pleasure god and got a nice measured bod and am equipped with a True Pleasure Rod.




    Submitted on 2007-06-09 16:36:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      seriously, i love. i can really feel it in my soul. it's flat out amazing.
    | Posted on 2008-01-06 00:00:00 | by bogg | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. kinda....well, It was great. amazing. words do not fit the description. :]


    reminds me of.........TOAST!
    | Posted on 2008-01-06 00:00:00 | by bogg | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it but its not enough. keep trying.



    tina
    | Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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