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Words I Hope To Once Be True.


Author: DrewDilla
ASL Info:    25/M/Chicago
Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 131 /196 /51
Words: 163
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
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Average Vote:    1.0000
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Words I Hope To Once Be True.





When you look I book to you cause you like glue I cant stop thinkin of you.

Just about every 2 minutes it’s you I have to be within n it’s like your pleasure never ends.

Without you I’m in complete loneliness. I’m just askin you to hold me please. I think I got the keys.

To unlock your hearts love. Which starts above . The smarts of a dove.

My finger tips are really quick, and I’m slow with my dick, and got a lovely lick.

and your hips I’ll suck with my lips along with your tits. I don’t need any tool kits.
I’m a gift from the pleasure god and got a nice measured bod and am equipped with a True Pleasure Rod.




Submitted on 2007-06-09 16:36:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  seriously, i love. i can really feel it in my soul. it's flat out amazing.
| Posted on 2008-01-06 00:00:00 | by bogg | [ Reply to This ]
  wow. kinda....well, It was great. amazing. words do not fit the description. :]


reminds me of.........TOAST!
| Posted on 2008-01-06 00:00:00 | by bogg | [ Reply to This ]
  i like it but its not enough. keep trying.



tina
| Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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