What I Know... -------------------------------------------
I said I was sorry
I said I mised you
I dont know what more you want
What I know is you love her still
What I know is were are friends
What I dont know is what you were going to say
Before I opened my big mouth
I didnt mean what I said
And I cant do anything more than this
What I know is that you care
Because you are allways there to protect me
And I ask for nothing in return
But for you to be happy
That is all I want
And if you are happy without me
That is fine
We had fun together
And I will miss you allways
Just one more thing before I go
In our special language
"Ai Skidou."
Kaede was right
Nice Disa, a few spelling errors. But that is whatever, you shouldn't feel so down all the time it isn't healthy.
Allways, spelled A-L-W-A-Y-S
But other then that this was a pretty decent poem. I have seen better, but none quiet like yours.
You type the same as soon of the other poems I had found before hand, and at times I felt like I was re-reading another old poem.
But you are you, don’t what you have to do. ;]
Nice work Disa, out of a score of five I would rate this a 3/5.
One point loss for spelling, and another for something else, loss of creativity. But still, very unique in your own way.
Mimi
awww, i hope whoever's mad at u or upset will forgive u and love u all thew same again!!! they cant b mad at a friend who cares and wants them happy now do they? or someone they even made a code up with!!! hope all is well and loved this!!
~*alexis*~
Submission Name: What I Know...
