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    dots Submission Name: yellow dawgdots
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    Author: to-wit
    Elite Ratio:    0.59 - 27/148/488
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsyellow dawgdots
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    somethings wrong
    my song went down
    something piffy
    internet jiffy
    wiffy the angel
    something
    star spangeled banner
    channer temp
    love the imp
    somthing grip
    ship the lights out
    were fantastic
    tragic




    Submitted on 2007-06-09 19:28:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      its broken arrow
    | Posted on 2007-06-11 00:00:00 | by to-wit | [ Reply to This ]
      not sure i understood it, but does this describe "the yellow dawg?" or is the yellow dawg ur gangsta nickname lmao lol nice rhyming tho!
    ~*alexis*~
    | Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]


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