My Little Secret

Author: Priestess ASL Info:    21/female/usa Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 49 /118 /51 Words: 148

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My Little Secret

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My misery has been left unsaid But no one is to blame These insane thoughts that fill my head Would bring my family shame O how these thoughts torture me These thoughts inside my head I wish my mind was filled with glee Instead it's filled with dread I wish that I could sleep at night Without tears staining my cheek I wish inside I could be light But these tears make me feel weak I fear no one can comfort me My horrid wretched being I remain trapped in my misery And for now it will stay unseen So how do I express my agony? How do I express my pain? Through a simple thing called poetry And thats how I stay sane

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just wait, it gets better. i promise...

| Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by blackbird | [ Reply to This ]

i like it alot. your style is invigorating.

| Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by save me | [ Reply to This ]

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