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Submission Name: My Little Secret dots

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Author:	Priestess
ASL Info:	21/female/usa
Elite Ratio:	2.22 - 49/118/51
Words:	148

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	1184
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	1197

Description:
Not my favorite poem, but please tell me what you think anyways.

My Little Secret dots

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My misery has been left unsaid
But no one is to blame
These insane thoughts that fill my head
Would bring my family shame

O how these thoughts torture me
These thoughts inside my head
I wish my mind was filled with glee
Instead it's filled with dread

I wish that I could sleep at night
Without tears staining my cheek
I wish inside I could be light
But these tears make me feel weak

I fear no one can comfort me
My horrid wretched being
I remain trapped in my misery
And for now it will stay unseen

So how do I express my agony?
How do I express my pain?
Through a simple thing called poetry
And thats how I stay sane

Submitted on 2007-06-09 19:47:23 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
just wait, it gets better. i promise...
| Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by blackbird | [ Reply to This ]
i like it alot. your style is invigorating.
| Posted on 2007-06-10 00:00:00 | by save me | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.